I like the general look of it. You shouldn't say you're a "competent traveler", whatever that means. In case you're applying for a job that involves travel, th

I like the general look of it. You shouldn't say you're a "competent traveler", whatever that means. In case you're applying for a job that involves travel, the company will be happy enough to know that you're willing to travel. The "does" and "is looking for" parts are too sparse. On the "does": there are dozens of real-time and mobile OSes, tell us which you know and what did you do with them. Can you build a device driver from scratch? Are you a Debian maintainer, or you just maintained a customized local package during an internship? Maybe if you answer all of this your un-resume will turn into something more like a resume, but so be it. It's not clear what you're looking for. Do you want to be a developer, a product manager, or would you be just as happy to do customer support if there's travel involved? There's nothing wrong with not knowing what you want to do in that stage, but I think your description could be clearer. You probably should not garble your email address; just write a "@" instead of "AT". No need to make the HR person think. If you're really worried about spam then either don't put that version online or make the address an image.