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Is your arrogant and condescending tone really necessary here?

• traverseda 9y ago
  I don't really see the issue. This is well withon the bounds of acceptable and coaching the key points in more passive language would just make it longer with very little upside. I mean, in other communities it would be a good thing. But I'd prefer to keep that kind of tone-policing away from HN and focus on content.
  • Retric 9y ago
    Neutral tone tends to take up less space consider the same content but: "Don't be a slob", "Don't accumulate shit", and "Don't be stupid with your space" are obvious and therefore unhelpful. You will notice your improved condition when you have that extra few feet of floor space so do Put things away. Useful advice is more inline with: "Replace bulky items with compact travel/camping equivalents." "small linen towels instead of big fluffy bath ones that take forever to dry" (I'd never buy anything else https://www.amazon.com/dp/B00WBC17N4/ https://www.amazon.com/dp/B00WBC17N4/) Also, things you want to store over summer like comforters and winter coats along with, bags, dishes, and so forth.
    • BugsJustFindMe 9y ago
      Different strokes, I guess. Want edit access to my account?
    • bitJericho 9y ago
      It's also boring. Part of being a good writer is being not boring.