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The HP books also suffers a bit from being written one chapter at a time. But at the same time, it's an interesting concept seeing a story evolve that way. I fo
by maaaats 9y ago
The HP books also suffers a bit from being written one chapter at a time. But at the same time, it's an interesting concept seeing a story evolve that way. I found some of the first chapters a bit long-winded, but after that I think the book found its direction.
- zeroer 9y agoYea, I agree. Yudkowski found his voice starting around chapter 20. The initial chapters could use a good rewriting.