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This possibly isn't the least hard to read sentence I have read :) Easier to read and hopefully captured what you were trying to say: > Reduced monetization l
by epicide 9y ago
This possibly isn't the least hard to read sentence I have read :)
Easier to read and hopefully captured what you were trying to say:
> Reduced monetization likely reduced developer pay.
- dragonwriter 9y agoA more accurate rephrasing would be: The lack of effort toward monetization likely is an effect of the same cause as low developer pay. I was suggesting that the two were linked, but not suggesting the specific causal link from monetization to developer pay of your version. But you are correct that the original was unnecessarily elliptical.