Thanks for the criticism. I've removed most of the bookends and reference to any external resource and left just the "few sentences hidden in the middle" which

Thanks for the criticism. I've removed most of the bookends and reference to any external resource and left just the "few sentences hidden in the middle" which people can read or ignore. I don't think your summary of it is perfect, but close enough, you read me fine. thanks for the constructive feedback. (not sarcastic.)