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You should really think about investing in a copy editor for getkookoo.com. The style is great but the content is confusing and writing the price as "$19.9" is
by primitivesuave 9y ago
You should really think about investing in a copy editor for getkookoo.com. The style is great but the content is confusing and writing the price as "$19.9" is highly unusual in the US. There are also common sensical things that a copy editor will help you find, e.g. if your tag line is "Let's make those customers happy!" the line underneath it should clearly state how your service helps make those customers happy. The metrics on the number of agents and call minutes per day are tiny and easy to miss - check out how prominently metrics are displayed on other SaaS products.
Hope this helped, and best of luck to you!
- nutanc 9y agoThis certainly helped. Thanks for taking the time to reply.
- Harelin 9y agoSeconding the need for a copy editor. I lost interest immediately. - The "Lets make those customers happy!" should be "Let's make those customers happy!" - There is no space after the comma in "calls,IVR," and "chat,customer" Don't underestimate the importance of attention to detail. These tiny mistakes would have even been caught by Microsoft Word.