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Your English is very good, I was skim-reading and actually didn't even notice any mistakes until I saw your question at the bottom so I re-read the whole thing,
by brokenmachine 10y ago
Your English is very good, I was skim-reading and actually didn't even notice any mistakes until I saw your question at the bottom so I re-read the whole thing, but I thought you may want some comments:
> and I were even able to fetch
should be "I was"
> to at least making sure
should be "to at least make sure"
Other than that a few commas would be nice to make some of those long sentences flow a bit smoother. If you were speaking, you'd need to take a breath somewhere!
You are doing ridiculously good for a third language though!!
I have a lot of respect for people who learn languages, it shows a lot of courage and curiosity.
- hultner 10y agoI can't edit my comment anymore but I've taken notice of your critique, thank you very much for being so helpful!