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- Cookies bar, make it appear above the nav, logo etc - where it appears currently makes it too much a part of the design. - Pleasant colour scheme, before I r
by michaelflux 9y ago
- Cookies bar, make it appear above the nav, logo etc - where it appears currently makes it too much a part of the design.
- Pleasant colour scheme, before I read anything, already feels calm and cool.
- 'Join our Beta' button is too light. either make it bold, or with a solid green background.
- 'Join our Beta' button just takes me to the form right under it. Essentially 2 CTAs that do the same thing. Appears like the button was put in there just because without a clear purpose.
- 'Sign Up' form - makes it sound like I'm signing up for a newsletter which further confuses the user - am I signing up for the beta, or for some newsletters?
- Either insert a line break after '...limited Beta release.' or prevent text from wrapping.
- 'Email address' - ideally specify 'Your Work email' if you intend to target this at companies. Gets you a more valuable email as from it you can determine not just exactly where they work, but who their coworkers are. Then you can retarget the entire department/company do raise awareness about how the product would help them all collaborate.
'A collaborative knowledgesharing tool for teams.' - first thought "so like any of the million internal wikis? what's different about yours?' I'm not even remotely sold. What's your USP? Why should I even consider you? Is there any unique features?
- Add a bit of text about how you're not going to spam me if I give you my email address. Ideally just replace the 'signup to join our waiting list' text - it offers no value.
- Too much vertical padding between sections. By time I scroll to bottom of a section, it looks like the page is over, nothing to catch my attention so I keep scrolling down.
- Missing H1 in last section (above likes, comments etc)
- While very nice looking, a bit too much whitespace in places - bordering on boring.
- 'Join our Beta' text at bottom - give it the same style as an H1, give me extra incentive rather than just a command.
- In grey area with form, padding on the bottom is much bigger than padding on top - make them the same.
- Overall I'd say it's 70% there, just give it a bit more substance, a splash of colour, and clean up all the varying padding and margins, right now it feels like it's designed more for Dribbble likes than for conversions.
- Akreidly 9y agoGreat points! Will definitely go back to review and fix - thanks man!