This article is interesting, but I think many people will stop after reading the first two or three paragraphs, and never arrive at the interesting parts. Imagi

This article is interesting, but I think many people will stop after reading the first two or three paragraphs, and never arrive at the interesting parts. Imagine someone reading out loud the text. Nobody would deliver the current version of it as a talk or a speech. It is more like reading someone's private diary or a letter to a close friend, where we don't mind them going off the topic. But perhaps that style of writing is not such a bad thing.