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Something that works for me - I avoid distilling. Instead I focus on a killer opening line. It's really hard to take four, or whatever, paragraphs and reduce t
by jwilliams 10y ago
Something that works for me - I avoid distilling. Instead I focus on a killer opening line.
It's really hard to take four, or whatever, paragraphs and reduce that to one sentence. It'll feel lossy every step.
Instead I focus on the first and most powerful sentence. From there I imagine it opening up a dialog where all the possibilities and nuances can flow. But you'd got to start at that sentence.
Now, maybe it'll not be that exactly, but I find that process a lot more fruitful than a distilling one.
- reubenswartz 10y agoI agree-- the idea of the first sentence is not to completely describe everything, but to get people interested enough to ask for more information.