OT but I hope you appreciate some feedback. I had a hard time getting past the "What are you going to make?" EX: "We are going to build the world's largest pri

OT but I hope you appreciate some feedback. I had a hard time getting past the "What are you going to make?" EX: "We are going to build the world's largest private network based on e.164 addresses." Then you go into how it technically works. I think you should spend less time on the specifics of how it works and more on what it does for customer, and if it's not clear why it's so important, maybe a sentence on that, in clear and plain English. Just my 2 cents, I hope it helps.