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I'm sure you're good, but the writing on your site is terrible. Just from scanning a random paragraph on this page http://www.confiz.com/company/engagement-mode
by petervandijck 16y ago
I'm sure you're good, but the writing on your site is terrible. Just from scanning a random paragraph on this page http://www.confiz.com/company/engagement-models http://www.confiz.com/company/engagement-models:
"We follow strict non-disclosure policies at Confiz which makes us credible." => that doesn't make any sense. How does a non-disclosure policy make you credible? Credible in what?
"Therefore we stand truly commited to delivering quality on time." Spelling mistake: "committed". Plus, everyone says that. That doesn't mean anything if you just state it like that without proof or explanation.
"There are two ways in which we work with our clients" => and you go on to list three!
And that's just 1 random paragraph. In short, spend some time on the writing, or hire someone, or remove some of it. A native English speaker (which I'm guessing you're not? I'm not.) will be turned off by this.