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The story would be a lot more powerful if it were vastly more concise and meandered far less. This reads like an angsty teens livejournal entry, which doesn't d
by donatj 10y ago
The story would be a lot more powerful if it were vastly more concise and meandered far less. This reads like an angsty teens livejournal entry, which doesn't do the serious nature of the matter justice.
- tptacek 10y agoIt wasn't written for your entertainment.
- flukus 10y agoIt was written to evoke an emotional response though, not to layout a series of events clearly and concisely.
- M_Grey 10y agoI have to ask, do you have anything to say regarding the content, or just the style? You seem so passionate about that content, but you never address it, just lament that it was hard done by. That strikes me as either myopic, or dishonest.
- busterarm 10y agoAngst? Check. Drama? Check. Green hair? Check. Leaking details of private in-confidence conversations to the public? Check. Not respectfully working with another person to resolve a dispute when that person seems to be making a best-effort. Check. The checkboxes on my "Do Not Associate With" list keep tallying up.
- dang 10y agoPlease don't comment like this here.
- fatbird 10y agoThe name of this fallacy is "tone argument".
- watersb 10y agoOn the contrary, I am impressed by the author's ability to maintain a sequence of events, while being tossed from one office to another. If you found this account to be "meandering", imagine what it would be like, trying to follow procedures in the face of this conflicting, and (in my opinion) intentionally manipulative instructions from your boss, your boss' boss, the HR department...
- kmfrk 10y agoYou seem like a tremendous asshole; why even post something like that?