I also felt that closing line was unnecessary and actually detracted a bit from the thrust of the article. It ironically felt a little tone-deaf to me. (1) I d

I also felt that closing line was unnecessary and actually detracted a bit from the thrust of the article. It ironically felt a little tone-deaf to me. (1) I don't really like being shamed over having a penis. I don't really like being told that my genitals are ugly. (2) It's known from the outset that not everyone will agree with that statement (e.g., many gay men). (3) Is taking a small jab at all men, even the ones who are not part of the problem, really the best way to end the article? I don't think it's a big deal, though, and I'm happily willing to overlook it for the sake of the rest of the article.