I agree as well on the too much writing. People don't like to read that much. I think you should reduce your copy on this page to a few (in my experience people

I agree as well on the too much writing. People don't like to read that much. I think you should reduce your copy on this page to a few (in my experience people tend to like groups of 3) of the highest priority issues and then link off to another page for each section should the prospect want more information.