Agree with too much writing. For example, "PowerGrabber is an invitation manager. It captures the addresses from your inbound and outbound emails, so you can in

Agree with too much writing. For example, "PowerGrabber is an invitation manager. It captures the addresses from your inbound and outbound emails, so you can invite the people you email to join your LinkedIn network." is too long for a headline. Shorter version could be: "Easily invite more people you know to Linkedin", or something like that (you surely know the value proposition better than me ;) And then but the most important things in bullets: the price, the fact that it's a Windows download, etc. Edit down that text, shorter is better :)