First, 23 yo is young, don't worry. I'm not a designer expert but a few remarks : On your website I can't find your resume, a simple pdf that I could skim thr

First, 23 yo is young, don't worry. I'm not a designer expert but a few remarks : On your website I can't find your resume, a simple pdf that I could skim through quickly, or even a linkedin link. On each of your projects, I would put a bullet point or 2 about the key learnings/skills you got for each project. For software engineers it'd be useful to see something like: [App Foo] : platform for X and Y. Written in C++ using Unity Framework. That way, if I know any of these, I know I can ask you more questions about App Foo if I know about C++ or Unity. "iOS and Android", "get over 8000 users the first month, be top 10 of its category, get featured in top women's publications online" should show up somewhere too! Similarly, I understand your minimalism effort but for each job position, I would add bullet points about your key experience, key skills, and more importantly key business impacts (and key customers if allowed) You need to emphasize why companies should hire you, not why you want to be hired by company. If you're willing to work in the US, be clear about it (is it only NYC?), also be clear about the fact that you are a US citizen or your work authorization status in the US.