I am glad you are responding well here, but just an example of tone from your post: > I wish he wasn’t ripping off Nugget, but the fact that he is actually doi

I am glad you are responding well here, but just an example of tone from your post: > I wish he wasn’t ripping off Nugget, but the fact that he is actually doing something is a big deal. This would be a lot more impactful edited as such: > The fact that he is actually doing something is a big deal. The little (potentially read as snide ["ripping off"]) opening context for the sentiment actually detracts from its point and helps establish a negative author tone for potential readers. In general, placing any point behind a "but" detracts from impact and moves said impact to the opening context. Hey writing is hard and written tone is super difficult to manage! As an idea, you might consider having friends read posts and comment on the overall tone before publishing (if you don't already). Disclaimer: I am not a good writer so apply grains of salt liberally.