I commend your desire to improve your posts. That's something that's always on my mind as well. From my unsolicited, third-party perspective, two things jump o

I commend your desire to improve your posts. That's something that's always on my mind as well. From my unsolicited, third-party perspective, two things jump out at me. - You could do without the first sentence entirely. - The insinuation that the parent is possibly a shill (an Uber employee) The rest of it is fairly neutral.