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IMO the page is too busy. The value proposition is lost in a sea of text. Maybe try something simple and straightforward: http://www.apple.com/macbookair/ ht
by richcollins 16y ago
IMO the page is too busy. The value proposition is lost in a sea of text. Maybe try something simple and straightforward:
http://www.apple.com/macbookair/ http://www.apple.com/macbookair/
Using your value prop: "Stop losing money on missed appointments"
- petervandijck 16y agoAgree with that. Something like: "(value:) Stop losing money on missed appointments (large font). (how it works:) Send automatic phonecall reminders to your clients."