While I don't think I'm at all within the target market (as has been discussed elsewhere in the thread), but I had to give you kudos for the way you present it

While I don't think I'm at all within the target market (as has been discussed elsewhere in the thread), but I had to give you kudos for the way you present it to the user. It very quickly shows you why they should use your service and what they may be able to get out of it. Good job.