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This is the first thing involving writing I've ever published, so I'd appreciate any comments about my writing. Please let me know what you didn't like or did l
by kevinwang 10y ago
This is the first thing involving writing I've ever published, so I'd appreciate any comments about my writing. Please let me know what you didn't like or did like about it!
- GFischer 10y agoCongratulations for starting and putting it out there :) First impression is that it looks good. I didn't like the too long, out of context and unattributed quote at the beginning though. It definitely threw me off (wasn't I here to read about Facebook games?).