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A couple thoughts to improve the home page: 1. There are a few typos you should fix if you want to seem credible. "Don't wory" should be "Don't worry," there's
by zefhous 16y ago
A couple thoughts to improve the home page:
1. There are a few typos you should fix if you want to seem credible. "Don't wory" should be "Don't worry," there's no period in the first sentence of the small text, and there is an extra space before both exclamation points (I know that's a French thing to do, but it's not standard in English).
2. Don't use jpegs for this type of image, a PNG will be much more crisp. Right now there are clarity issues in the blue surrounding text.
3. If you use text in the HTML instead of using an image it will be much more friendly. The small text looks very odd on a Mac and in browsers that have good font rendering and anti-aliasing.
Good luck!
- olalonde 16y agoThanks, I've fixed those issues. Good guess on the French thing, that's actually my mother tongue.