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My take is that this article is also really poorly written. The overly formal tone and extended sentence structure makes it seem like the author is trying too h
by abvdasker 10y ago
My take is that this article is also really poorly written. The overly formal tone and extended sentence structure makes it seem like the author is trying too hard to sound smart. He's doing this especially annoying type of bad writing where he thinks the tone he would use for an academic research paper read by one professor is a good fit for an opinion piece that will be seen by thousands.
> There are many issues with social media, from its corrosion of civic life to its cultural shallowness, but the argument I want to make here is more pragmatic: You should quit social media because it can hurt your career."
> Perhaps more important, however, than my specific objections to the idea that social media is a harmless lift to your career, is my general unease with the mind-set this belief fosters.
Just talk to me like a person! Unless you're Slavoj Žižek you should probably go for something more accessible and conversational.
- nbouscal 10y agoYou think that sounds like a research paper? What field are you reading research papers in?! For what it's worth, the author of the article has written multiple best-selling books for popular audiences.