Your copy is pretty bad. For starters, take away the multiple exclamation points concerning not needing to give payment info. Second, change this: We would lov

Your copy is pretty bad. For starters, take away the multiple exclamation points concerning not needing to give payment info. Second, change this: We would love to hear from you. If you have any comments or queries, please leave us a message. Both of those things signal that you are desperate for attention. You need to hit a note of being available for the needs of your customers, but not sitting around twiddling your thumbs, hoping against hope for the phone to ring. Perhaps something like "For your convenience, you can leave us a message via this form any time of the day or night. We will get back to you as soon as we can." You also need to change how you talk to your customers. You want to describe the features of your product in a way that makes it clear what the tangible benefits are. This usually does not come from giving "specs." You need to make that info available too, but that cannot be your primary means for explaining your value position.