Niggle: The title should be "How _One_ Man's …", not "How _a_ Man's …". This reflects the actual title of the article, and avoids an ambiguous reading (was this

Niggle: The title should be "How _One_ Man's …", not "How _a_ Man's …". This reflects the actual title of the article, and avoids an ambiguous reading (was this bad math attributed to _men_, or a singular person?)