It's a very good point--but its lost in translation. There is nothing that aggrevates a reader more, whether consciously or subconsciously, than being told "THI

It's a very good point--but its lost in translation. There is nothing that aggrevates a reader more, whether consciously or subconsciously, than being told "THIS IS THE CONCLUSION". It is? Really? Are you sure? Criticisms, however well thought out, are ineffective when you cannot convey the thought properly.