So the general structure of your video seems okay: Show a long and annoying way of doing something, then show a better way using your product. But without narr

So the general structure of your video seems okay: Show a long and annoying way of doing something, then show a better way using your product. But without narration I don't understand well enough what's going on here or why your way is better. Agree on the AU price thing. Immediately makes me think I can't order it anyway.