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"Innovate or die, bitches." Childish at best. And I'm certainly no stickler for grammar and style, but I had trouble reading past this one: "Matter of fact, it
by mgcross 17y ago
"Innovate or die, bitches." Childish at best. And I'm certainly no stickler for grammar and style, but I had trouble reading past this one: "Matter of fact, it was sure of its decision to forget OS X development that it focused Premiere solely for Windows only to see Apple turnaround and buy a Macromedia offshoot, repackage it as a Final Cut and cut Adobe out a lucrative stream."
- kelnos 17y agoMore style than grammar... the sentence is mostly grammatical, but could use a couple more commas and be a little clearer about what the pronoun "it" stands for. Not to mention that "turn around" is two words. Anyway, though, a critique on grammar and style is hardly the best way to evaluate its message... which I think was a good one. The cheap shot at the end was unfortunate, but the rest was reasonable, I think.