It's nicely formatted, and it wasn't written by a retarded monkey, which is always good, but I really don't see how it rises above 'minimally acceptable' - it

It's nicely formatted, and it wasn't written by a retarded monkey, which is always good, but I really don't see how it rises above 'minimally acceptable' - it's all worded in vague HR speak, which is expected, but prevents it from being 'very good' in my opinion.