One could even make the argument that a literal translation of 'star-crossed' would be equally correct; if the corresponding construct of adverse astrology exis

One could even make the argument that a literal translation of 'star-crossed' would be equally correct; if the corresponding construct of adverse astrology exists in the language being translated into, the literal translation preserves the cosmological scope, while wretched, even though it demonstrates insight into an aspect of what 'star-crossed' means, strips away that crucial facet of the meaning. These lovers aren't wretched because of illness or poverty. They're wretched because of destiny. +1 for Darmok. If you can handle his particular affinity for the sound of his own pen scratch, Hofstader's Le Ton Beau de Marot is another excellent discussion of how -hard- translation is.