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I love the linebreak between the second and third stanza. It seems like a weird thing to love. But I finish stanza 2 and I'm like "oh no!" then a linebreak come
by viewer5 10y ago
I love the linebreak between the second and third stanza. It seems like a weird thing to love. But I finish stanza 2 and I'm like "oh no!" then a linebreak comes and I expect something different, but line 1 is the same list but more horrible.
So I enjoy (and am horrified by) the effect that linebreak had.
Thank you for sharing with us. That was horrifying and lovely.
- bnjmn 10y agoI'll take "horrifying and lovely" any day!