This is a really well written piece, so its petty to pick on an aspect of the style, but:I hate the trend of writing really short sentences and starting a new p

This is a really well written piece, so its petty to pick on an aspect of the style, but:I hate the trend of writing really short sentences and starting a new paragraph after almost every sentence. When you hear it in your head it's supposed to sound like a grave and wise and worldly narrator over a poignant montage or something. It's cheap and corny.