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The Unlucky Billionaire – Gotta catch em’ all
- heckless 10y agoIt really irks me, when a sentence has an unnecessary comma in it, it probably should have been a semicolon instead. Bugs, the crap out of me and I can't keep reading anymore!
- amarpatel 10y ago> everybody, I read that sentence too many times
- writerlexs 10y agoThanks! Fixed :)
- skizm 10y agoPokemon Go is AR not VR. Also, I'm sure Zuck is enjoying PGo just like everyone else.
- writerlexs 10y agoYes it is :)
- codemac 10y ago> A 10-Part Series that explores the day-to-day life of one of the most successful Philanthropist, Revolutionary and Futurist of our generation ... well I hope our author "M" has some future-thinking humility as well.
- cortesoft 10y agoThis isn't satire?
- technofiend 10y agoRight? I mean if drubbing you over the head with four foot high walls with a 10 foot metal panel above is more aesthetically pleasing than trees doesn't scream disconnected from reality what does?
- fleitz 10y agoYeah that sentence essentially translated as 'build the wall' to me.
- codemac 10y agoI got confused with the story line, the earlier parts didn't seem to relate to the final paragraph. s m r t, I am so smart.
- bllguo 10y agoEDIT: Ah, made the connection at the end w/ Zuckerberg. Still don't think this is well written though. If someone told me a high school student (or even a precocious middle schooler) wrote this, I wouldn't be surprised.
- writerlexs 10y agoI've just tried to write something thats funny and simple to understand. But point noted :)
- meira 10y agoVery good!
- writerlexs 10y agoThank you. I plan to make it a weekly or biweekly thing :)