Great article, but I really wanted to read M's story as a contiguous block. The interruptions to explain the historical context and research detracted from the

Great article, but I really wanted to read M's story as a contiguous block. The interruptions to explain the historical context and research detracted from the immediacy of her (and H's) situation. In fact, the most important theory in the article seemed to be the sensor treatment theory using mirrors. All the other explanatory text may as well have been cut. I wonder if it worked for M.