The Esperanto part seems pretty good. There is one section with consistent errors, "Mi vizitis francio" does need a -n ending (francion). And again, "and" is no

The Esperanto part seems pretty good. There is one section with consistent errors, "Mi vizitis francio" does need a -n ending (francion). And again, "and" is not a preposition. But that's all I noticed in a quick skim.