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I dunno, he meanders through the story in a very long-winded way, including bunches of stuff that doesn't actually move the narrative forward. A good editor co
by joncp 10y ago
I dunno, he meanders through the story in a very long-winded way, including bunches of stuff that doesn't actually move the narrative forward. A good editor could have helped him cut maybe a third out of that without losing anything of significance. Then again, it's a blog so no big deal.
- StavrosK 10y agoYeah, you can pretty much skip the later entries without missing much, it's all about how they searched but couldn't find anything else.
- ktRolster 10y agoUnless you like reading trip reports, then it was great. I wish he had described the problems with the police in more detail, though.
- lttlrck 10y agoNaturally it could be better but I was riveted. My patience has suffered far more at the hands of more established authors like Tom Clancy and more recently Neal Stephenson with stuff that I really don't need to know.