I like the children's illustrated guide concept (for adults). You definitely took it to an extreme here in terms of the characters and storyline. Assuming you a

I like the children's illustrated guide concept (for adults). You definitely took it to an extreme here in terms of the characters and storyline. Assuming you aren't really trying to start a children's book series, I think if you toned down the cuteness just a little bit, you might have something interesting in explaining complex concepts.