Well for starters I would fix the work history section where you say you were an "internee" at Pakistan International Airlines, since "internee" means "a person

Well for starters I would fix the work history section where you say you were an "internee" at Pakistan International Airlines, since "internee" means "a person who is confined as a prisoner, especially for political or military reasons." - probably not the right impression to give a potential employer... Intern is the word you were looking for.