I found the story and the points made very interesting, but in telling it the excerpt seemed overly-redundant: it repeated similar ideas several times in slight

I found the story and the points made very interesting, but in telling it the excerpt seemed overly-redundant: it repeated similar ideas several times in slightly different ways. I feel like I could have had a similar experience in an article of half the length or less. Sorry, but I don't think I could read an entire book written in this manner.