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Well, he did it all wrong. When you are done reading the Madlibs, it should read like a sentence. What he did was surround regular text fields with strange se
by dpcan 17y ago
Well, he did it all wrong.
When you are done reading the Madlibs, it should read like a sentence. What he did was surround regular text fields with strange sentences. When you are done filling it out, you can't just read it like a regular sentence.
It should have been:
I would like to make bingo cards! Please save them for me under the name [ Your Name ], and and my email address is [ Email address] in case you need to contact me. But please [do / don't] contact me twice with hints, and [do / don't] send me a newsletter.
See, when you are done, you can read it like a sentence.
All he did was replace "Username" with longer wording. It didn't seem "fun" the way you did it, just odd and off-putting.
- micrypt 17y agoTrue. Made a few adjustments and I think it looks a bit better already: http://twitpic.com/15t9cc/full http://twitpic.com/15t9cc/full
- Herring 17y agoA bit, yeah. But the pixels are still really off. I don't even know why, I just see they're wrong.
- alttab 17y agoI think its possible its the wide difference in font. Because the madlib text looks very different (as opposed to bold input labels) it looks frail and slapped together. Larger fonts, bolder text, and more space could probably help it more visually.