This sentence: "Bloggers ... spent a little more time than expected studying the battery indicators, as opposed to the incredible advancements in web browsing f

This sentence: "Bloggers ... spent a little more time than expected studying the battery indicators, as opposed to the incredible advancements in web browsing for mobile phones." Having Flash on my mobile is not an advancement in web browsing, on mobile or desktop: People block Flash for a reason, and that sentence just comes across as arrogant.