I want lumiverse to become the perfect place for people to publish, discover and discuss great educational videos. I want to build a friendly and intelligent co

I want lumiverse to become the perfect place for people to publish, discover and discuss great educational videos. I want to build a friendly and intelligent community, make it easy for video creators to find an audience, and make it easy for viewers to discover awesome videos. In the future, I want to expand into other types of content(starting with tutorials, art, short films, and comedy), and create the most awesome platform for hosting and selling high quality video series. I have received a rejection letter from YC Fellowship(you can read the application here - https://medium.com/@rayalez/lumiverse-yc-application-c66d05688369 https://medium.com/@rayalez/lumiverse-yc-application-c66d056...), and now I'm trying to figure out what's wrong, and what can be done better. I would really love some feedback and critique. How would you improve it? What are the flaws in this idea? What would you do with this platform?