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I don't think this is good copy at all... (And definitely not just due to the bad jokes.) Yo, you signed up for Rabbut Ashley, Do you know who’s a
by meowface 11y ago
I don't think this is good copy at all... (And definitely not just due to the bad jokes.)
Yo, you signed up for Rabbut
Ashley,
Do you know who’s awesome? You are.
Do you know why? Because your blogs are about to get more action than you got
on your honeymoon. Thats right, more email collections and more personalized
updates than ever before (what did you think I meant?)
Before you pull your head out of the gutter,
answer me one thing. Why did you sign up for Rabbut?
I ask because:
1.) I want to build the best tool that you can possibly get
2.) I can’t read your mind
3.) Who doesn’t want more action? (Still talking about your blog!)
And lets be honest, no one wants to spend all night long figuring out
how to setup your emails, so take this, it’s a quick start guide:
https://rabbut.com/a-hand-held-guide-to-start-on-rabbut/
If that doesn’t work, hurry up and email me so I can help you
solve your problems. That way you’ll have more time for your
personal life. (This time I don't mean your blog.)
- Mandatum 11y agoI understand what they're trying to do, but it's still kind of awkward. I tend to avoid references to intercourse in my business emails, and it seems a little bit crass to do so in blogs-as-emails-as-a-service software, as well as in-parentheses jokes (they just seem forced unless it's satire). Having a look at their website it's a pretty small shop, so can't expect them to have a dedicated marketing team to write copy.
- meowface 11y agoThere are also at least 5 grammar mistakes in it.