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This could use a good revision/proofreading, it uses punctuation incorrectly, jumps around, and is difficult for me to read. Which is a shame because the articl
by superswordfish 11y ago
This could use a good revision/proofreading, it uses punctuation incorrectly, jumps around, and is difficult for me to read. Which is a shame because the article looks interesting. Maybe I'll give it another stab after a cup of coffee.
- gnashville 11y agoClicked, fought my way through those first two paragraphs, left.
- eric_h 11y agoI agree, but I toughed it out and I felt that it was worth it. It's very depressing and while I (who've lived in NYC for 14 years) have heard mention many times of East New York, and how it's a really shitty neighborhood, I had no idea that it really is the worst neighborhood in NYC. It's really quite depressing, though the author does mention some initiatives that perhaps are a sign of a light at the end of a tunnel that's more than a hundred years long.
- theklub 11y agoWhose up-voting this? That's the real question.
- intrasight 11y agoYeah - I tried for about 30 seconds and gave up. "Exception: maximum parse error exceeded."
- ablation 11y agoAgreed. It had so many stylistic tics - intentional or otherwise - that I found it testing my concentration. A shame, as it was quite interesting. Maybe I'll give it another go tomorrow.