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I would also add overuse of adverbs. Good to see you removed most of them in your rewrite.
by MrRage 17y ago
I would also add overuse of adverbs. Good to see you removed most of them in your rewrite.
- gry 17y agoAgreed. I left "overtly" with intent. There is something far more deliberate and newsworthy, IMHO.