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Re-read the headline: > Walt Whitman's Letter For A Dying Soldier To His Wife Discovered Just make sure you separate the middle part- Letter For A Dying Soldi
by Polyphonie 11y ago
Re-read the headline:
> Walt Whitman's Letter For A Dying Soldier To His Wife Discovered
Just make sure you separate the middle part- Letter For A Dying Soldier To His Wife- from the rest.
- gpvos 11y agoThat is actually the part with the problem. One problem for me is that when initially scanning the sentence, "for" implies that the letter is intended to be sent to the soldier; "on behalf of" would be clearer. Another minor unclarity is that "his" can refer to either the soldier or Walt Whitman.