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Interesting idea. I think the copy on your landing page needs some work. In particular, the intro paragraph ("Planergize is an online service that ..") seems a
by Maciek416 17y ago
Interesting idea.
I think the copy on your landing page needs some work. In particular, the intro paragraph ("Planergize is an online service that ..") seems a bit muddled. I wasn't sure at first whether your site was about plans, or about wedding planning (given the badge in the top left). I think you should easily be able to summarize what your service does without getting into the details of how you construct plans.
Good luck with the site!
- dshingarev 17y agoThanks for your comment - we are working on some nice graphics explaining what we do at the moment. And I agree - it is boring and doesn't work well...