Here is a quick edit that you should make. Where you write: > In laments terms You probably want to write: In layman's terms "In layman's terms" is an idio

Here is a quick edit that you should make. Where you write: > In laments terms You probably want to write: In layman's terms "In layman's terms" is an idiomatic way of saying, simply put, or explaining something to somebody who might not be technically inclined. To lament is to feel upset about something, it often refers to the grief one feels when a loved one has died. Overall, this was an interesting read, and I'm looking forward to your next installment.