I initially just downvoted you, but reconsidered and thought I'd reply instead. No. Please do not split up essays like this one to benefit the ever-disappearin

I initially just downvoted you, but reconsidered and thought I'd reply instead. No. Please do not split up essays like this one to benefit the ever-disappearing attention span of the average reader. There's an important difference between something being as long as it needs to be, and something being long for the sake of filling space. The presentation on this was just fine.